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Silence |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~It's the silence that scares me on nights like this~ Soft wind tapping at my window no light from the hall fresh pillowcase cradling my head catching tears as they fall silent nights like this only make me fear that she has found her peace far away from here. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so sad and lonely  Denise |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Aye, very lonely poem, but your emossions come through very clear, its a great peice. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ This is surely a longing. Beautifully rendered. Sometimes the silence embraces us with memory's sad recall. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Silence is but a sound we don't hear....This is lovely  I enjoyed it alot |
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