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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-05-13 06:53 PM


Lonesome in my agony,
invisible in my pain,
only you can can give me sunshine,
when all I have is rain.

A silence in my heart,
like the sea before the storm,
you test me to the limit,
feelings battered and torn.

All I need is you, forever in my arms,
You tempted me with passion,
you blinded me with charm.

Perfect woman I miss you much,
the words you say, your caring touch.
I long for a hug, a kiss or two,
that feeling of closeness,
I have with you.

So far away, yet close at heart,
my love crosses the water that keeps us apart,
Fear not for my love will never die,
just never say the word goodbye.


-Rich-  )



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netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-05-13 07:02 PM


Beautiful Rich ---)
sigh oh sigh at love and separation

netswan

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-13 07:10 PM


~Well done here Rich.  This is a beautiful piece...will be looking for more of your work.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-05-13 08:02 PM


serenity sighs....this is sweet and true...
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