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We cant go back anymore

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Lucius Cade
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0 posted 05-09-2000 02:14 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucius Cade

Today a girl comes forth
From thin air, blown into my life
She taunts and teases, as to say
She is in need of a man like I

All this right out of the blue

She praises my every move,
Takes intrest in all the same as I
Always talking sweet to me
As if to say, I want you

All this right out of the blue

Now a question I must ponder
Is that of love or friendship
We have past the point of no return
Its all or none, my heart informs

All this right out of the blue

Her gaze meets mine, we dont avert
Our eyes stay locked, as if in parley
Over our problem, of love or ......
It dawns on us...
There is no or, we cant go back anymore




 Lucidity is the answer to all problems



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Temptress
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1 posted 05-09-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Great poem, but whatever it is, I would be wary of such quick motion.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
Lucius Cade
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2 posted 05-09-2000 06:46 PM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Aye, I know it is quick, but she is so persistant......

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
JamesMichael
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3 posted 05-11-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A relationship where we jump right to intimacy is definately different from one that is slowly built upon friendship.  As you say it is hard to go back...probably impossible.  The feelings can be so intense in the beginning and then 3 months or 6 months or if it last 1 year down the road what is left of the relationship.  That is when we can really get in touch with our feelings more clearly.   James
 
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