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lucky
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0 posted 05-09-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky



[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
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Lucius Cade
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1 posted 05-09-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Wow, that was crazy. I love those style of poems and you write them so well, especially this one. How you were saved at the end by the young blond. great poem

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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2 posted 05-09-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Ah, memories!  Memories.
~ ~ ~




 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

Martie
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3 posted 05-09-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So sweet the tangle of your lives and the way you express it.
lucky
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4 posted 05-09-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I say thank kyou,

Lucius,

by the way the young blond isn't so young any more but she's just as beautiful.

Rosemary

Ah, memories my sweet!

Martie'

Yep..! We're tangled up all right. Glad you found the words.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
Meadowmuse
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5 posted 05-09-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Each time you share here it is as though I am reading a chapter of you...this one catches in the throat, a sighing ember, if you will, a visually stilling page of time ...

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


lucky
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6 posted 05-09-2000 08:25 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Well Claire,

Not every time... There's my funny side too, but yes most of the time I'm too serious, if I may. Maybe I'm still looking for a good equilibrium. Good point..!

 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 05-09-2000 08:59 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Lovely  
lucky
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8 posted 05-09-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Ruth,

It's always nice to see your eyes. Thank you...

 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
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9 posted 05-10-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lucky~

'the tears
we shed together as we huddled under
the black umbrella of time'

And this union goes beyond the eternity.
How fortunate you both are.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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10 posted 05-10-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"rolling the years forth and back like the waves"

This is a wonderful line Lucky.  I enjoyed your poem a great deal, it's a beautiful verse full of memories.

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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