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Tom26
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0 posted 05-08-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Tom26   Email Tom26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom26

This is the first time I've shared these poems with anyone before, so your comments are greatly appreciated.


I sit here and watch
Observe from afar
You're my love, my muse
My bright, shining star

The things we have shared
So long ago
The feelings I have
You may never know

Putting pen to paper
For what it's worth
You're the most beautiful person
I'll ever see on this Earth

An angel in the crowd
If only you knew
Then maybe someday
You'll love me, too

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Denise
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1 posted 05-08-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

...and I am graced with your second poem the second I finish reading your first!! This also is very lovely, Tom! The love and longing speak loudly in this one too! Very well done!

Denise
lorilockheart
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since 05-06-2000
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2 posted 05-08-2000 02:04 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Tom,
I find myself really liking your style.  The words "You're the most beautiful person
I'll ever see on this Earth" are absolutely beautiful themselves.  Good job.
Lori


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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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JamesMichael
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3 posted 05-08-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You have really revealed the feelings from your heart well...I am falling in love with the most beautiful woman on this island and now you have found the most beautiful person on this earth.  "And angel in the croud"...that is exactly the way I feel.  James
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Charlotte, NC


4 posted 05-08-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

--Tom

I am honored that you share your poetry with us. You have a beautiful style of writing. I really liked the
"Putting pen to paper
For what it's worth
You're the most beautiful person
I'll ever see on this Earth choice of words you used in this piece."

This stanza captured both my attention and my heart. Take care and best wishes!!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
 
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