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Tom26 Junior Member
since 2000-05-07
Posts 30 |
This is the first time I've shared these poems with anyone before, so your comments are greatly appreciated. I sit here and watch Observe from afar You're my love, my muse My bright, shining star The things we have shared So long ago The feelings I have You may never know Putting pen to paper For what it's worth You're the most beautiful person I'll ever see on this Earth An angel in the crowd If only you knew Then maybe someday You'll love me, too |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and I am graced with your second poem the second I finish reading your first!! This also is very lovely, Tom! The love and longing speak loudly in this one too! Very well done! Denise |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Tom, I find myself really liking your style. The words "You're the most beautiful person I'll ever see on this Earth" are absolutely beautiful themselves. Good job. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have really revealed the feelings from your heart well...I am falling in love with the most beautiful woman on this island and now you have found the most beautiful person on this earth. "And angel in the croud"...that is exactly the way I feel. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Tom I am honored that you share your poetry with us. You have a beautiful style of writing. I really liked the "Putting pen to paper For what it's worth You're the most beautiful person I'll ever see on this Earth choice of words you used in this piece." This stanza captured both my attention and my heart. Take care and best wishes!! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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