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Sven
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0 posted 05-07-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

You put me at ease with my soul
You complete me
               and make me feel whole
You can read me like a book
You've shown me love
               and helped me take a look

You've shown me your tender, gentle heart
I hold it close
               and always have from the start
You've given me more love than I've ever known
You've planted the seed
               and I hope it continues to grow

Together let us always be song of my life
Let us protect each other
               from our life's strife
I am your fate, you are my destiny
Friends first, lovers always
               we were meant to be

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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netswan
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1 posted 05-07-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Enchanting Sven ---)
I always love happy endings

netswan
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2 posted 05-07-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Hmmm, Sven once again this poetry you write speaks with such a kind and genuine heart.
CocoBacci
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3 posted 05-07-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

WOW What a romantic you are

This almost made ME swoon...lol

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
tracie66
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4 posted 05-07-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sven~
Ever so tenderly written straight from your beautiful heart, this is a very fine piece.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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5 posted 05-07-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Sven,

This is so romantic I was reminded of wedding vows.  These words would make great ones!
Straight from a loving heart!
Lori
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6 posted 05-07-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

~SVEN~

Now this is beautiful! You are a rare talent, this is a gem, it is such a heartfelt, romantic, and wise poem.
The line "I am your fate, you are my destiny, friends first, lovers always, we were meant to be" is a perfect ending;
it's true a man and a woman should be friends first for their relationships to last always.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
Janet Marie
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7 posted 05-07-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh how I love to hear you serenade your muse  
this is perfect Sven...
such devotion and tenderness..
so rare...SO NICE!!
loved this one!!
jm
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8 posted 05-07-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven, Sven, Sven~
So sofly you send such sweet words of content.

Beautiful heart you live in.
~*Marge*~



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Sven
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9 posted 05-07-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all my friends. . .

netswan. . . I do too. . .

CocoBaci. . . thank you, it's all I know. . .

Jeffrey. . . sorry, but I think that you'll have to wait!!  LOL

Tracie. . . thank you so much. . .

Lori. . . thank you, I don't know about vows, but glad that you liked them. . .

Melissa. . . you're right, friends first. . . that's the way that it has to be. . . thank you. . .

Janet. . . thank you so much. . .keep listening. . .

Marge, Marge, Marge. . . thank you, I have an opening for a one-bedroom, care to move in?  It's got a great view!  LOL

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Irie
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10 posted 05-07-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Sven my friend....
To have someone that makes you feel whole......
Oh My, not a thing can top that feeling!  
Very enjoyable read....(romantic as always)  

~Sheri
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11 posted 05-07-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Sven--
as always you make me smile..this was no exception...see  lol. you write with such a romantic flare it leaves me melting right along with all the other women in here i'm sure. keep up the exquisite writing and i'll keep on reading and listening to you write about the wonders of love *sigh*

take care,
amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Sven
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12 posted 05-07-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Sheri, thank you so much my friend. . . you're right. . .

Amy,   thank you very much. . . and I will keep on the writing if you keep on reading. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

devina
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13 posted 05-07-2000 11:38 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

So soft and delicate, Sven...I'm in awe at the moment...please excuse!!!  

*devina catches her breathe*

Just beautiful hon, need I say more? (didn't think so!)


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

kitkat
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14 posted 05-07-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

This was beautiful Sven. (sighs)
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