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From Me to You. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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You put me at ease with my soul You complete me and make me feel whole You can read me like a book You've shown me love and helped me take a look You've shown me your tender, gentle heart I hold it close and always have from the start You've given me more love than I've ever known You've planted the seed and I hope it continues to grow Together let us always be song of my life Let us protect each other from our life's strife I am your fate, you are my destiny Friends first, lovers always we were meant to be ---------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Enchanting Sven ---) I always love happy endings netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hmmm, Sven once again this poetry you write speaks with such a kind and genuine heart. CocoBacci |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW What a romantic you are This almost made ME swoon...lol All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Ever so tenderly written straight from your beautiful heart, this is a very fine piece. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Sven, This is so romantic I was reminded of wedding vows. These words would make great ones! Straight from a loving heart! Lori |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~SVEN~ Now this is beautiful! You are a rare talent, this is a gem, it is such a heartfelt, romantic, and wise poem. The line "I am your fate, you are my destiny, friends first, lovers always, we were meant to be" is a perfect ending; it's true a man and a woman should be friends first for their relationships to last always. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh how I love to hear you serenade your muse  this is perfect Sven... such devotion and tenderness.. so rare...SO NICE!! loved this one!! jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven, Sven, Sven~ So sofly you send such sweet words of content. Beautiful heart you live in. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . netswan. . . I do too. . . CocoBaci. . . thank you, it's all I know. . . Jeffrey. . . sorry, but I think that you'll have to wait!! LOL Tracie. . . thank you so much. . . Lori. . . thank you, I don't know about vows, but glad that you liked them. . . Melissa. . . you're right, friends first. . . that's the way that it has to be. . . thank you. . . Janet. . . thank you so much. . .keep listening. . . Marge, Marge, Marge. . . thank you, I have an opening for a one-bedroom, care to move in? It's got a great view! LOL -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sven my friend.... To have someone that makes you feel whole...... Oh My, not a thing can top that feeling!  Very enjoyable read....(romantic as always) ~Sheri |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven-- as always you make me smile..this was no exception...see  lol. you write with such a romantic flare it leaves me melting right along with all the other women in here i'm sure. keep up the exquisite writing and i'll keep on reading and listening to you write about the wonders of love *sigh*take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sheri, thank you so much my friend. . . you're right. . . Amy,  thank you very much. . . and I will keep on the writing if you keep on reading. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
So soft and delicate, Sven...I'm in awe at the moment...please excuse!!! *devina catches her breathe* Just beautiful hon, need I say more? (didn't think so!) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was beautiful Sven. (sighs) |
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