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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-05-07 05:34 PM


No Words
By Amy M. Kennedy

The light in your eyes sparkle like stars in the sky
You make me feel so wonderful, I have stopped asking why
There are no words needed for what we feel
We know in our hearts that it is real
The only sounds I hear are the beating of our hearts
And I flash back to when this passion first got its start
Though it hasn't been long since we first met, I feel like i have always known you
I am enraptured with you, do u realize the things you do?
As we kiss and lips touch together, and the wind blows all around
There are no words needed...our love is the only sound



 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2000-05-07 05:59 PM


Wonderful Amy!!

This is so beautifully Romantic. . . I can feel your happiness. . . and I'm so happy for you. . .

It's nice when all it takes is a look isn't it?

Excellent poem!!

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Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-05-07 06:02 PM


~Amy~

A lovely piece!  It's true, when it comes to love sometimes there is no need for words because actions speak louder than words!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

netswan
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3 posted 2000-05-07 06:52 PM


Oh, sigh, Amy-- lovely poem


netswan

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4 posted 2000-05-07 07:10 PM


Amy~
This sounds so YOU !
I like the way you expressed your feelings.
It's such a wonder to be blown away by the winds of romance.
Great thoughts, hon.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-05-07 07:15 PM


Amy, this is a beautiful piece. I love romance poems!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

CocoBaci
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6 posted 2000-05-07 07:23 PM


"no words needed our love is the only sound"
Oh, how I quietly sighed at that one verse that grasped my heart.
CocoBaci  

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7 posted 2000-05-07 08:30 PM


Amy,
Love can be a wonderful thing. Wish we all could find that special someone.

As for myself I already have...Yipee!

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-05-07 08:41 PM


This is wonderful Amy ... your shear joy of this romance shines through beautifully.

/Kit

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2000-05-07 09:20 PM


and I feel the same way bout you too...LOL
sorry...you know me...
just the mention of enraptured lips gets me going. LOL
YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS...RIGHT???
keep em coming...I do believe your just getting warmed up  
later gator
jm

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10 posted 2000-05-07 09:27 PM


Amy,
Beautiful and full of the hope of a new love.  Best wishes to you!!!  


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Aimster
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11 posted 2000-05-07 10:58 PM


Thanks to all who took the time to read this...and a few special thanks goes out to the following people for their wonderful replies  

Sven...i consider you the king of romance here...so it was an honor to receive such high praise from you. thank you for your sweet reply and yes it is nice when it all it takes is one look.  

Melissa...thanks for you nice comments and you are SO right..actions speak louder than words...nice poetic insight you have there.  

Netwsan..thanks for the "sigh" i think i'll sigh right along with you lol.  

Marge...Thanks so much for your reply. Glad you liked my expression of feelings...and yes romance is something to be in awe about!

Lovebug...glad you liked this piece. thanks for your reply  

Coco...That is my favorite stanza from this poem as well. Glad you liked.

Jeff...yes like the song says..."love is a wonderful thing". I am glad you have found the love of your life...i hope i find mine and this person is it   thanks hon for you kind reply.

Kit...Thanks so much for responding...u seem like a real sweetie  

Janet...Hmmm oh baby lol j/k. But yes i know you...i suppose i should be more careful when choosing my words..nah just playing around. i am glad you liked this. you always know how to make me smile. thanks for the encouragement  

Lone Wolf...Thanks for the wishes. I might need them. And thanks for replying!  

Love poems arent my thing guys...but you all strive to make me want to write better each time i pick up the pen. Thank you!

Love,
Amy
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 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-07-2000).]

devina
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12 posted 2000-05-07 11:59 PM


Where there is love, no words are needed sweetie, and this was lovely!!!! I'm happy that you've found what so many never do!!! Take care girl!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


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