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Heart's Blood Gift

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 05-05-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A
slip
of emotion
tenderly drawn
from her
giving
heart

A
place
to there
start
?

A
drop
of tear
to wash
away all fear
and down
to her
heart,
so

a
mind
forgiving
and heart
lives
on

~~~~~

Be thou kind to young maid
she sees naught but fear;
tenderly she grieves
for the one no longer here.

A warrior was he, gone in fury
to deliverance then, a cause to right;
but blinded by red, his love instead
cries his name softly at night.

Be thou kind to young maid
her heart is rent from pain
doubts she that she should live
to ever be loved again.

~~~~~

A
slip
of emotion
tenderly drawn
from her
giving
heart

A
place
to there
start
?

A
drop
of tear
to wash
away all fear
and down
to her
heart,
so

a
mind
forgiving
and heart
lives
on

~~~~

5 May, 2000
İKRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 05-05-2000 02:31 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

This is exquisite, Sunshine.

Loved each word of it!

Regards,
sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt
Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 05-05-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Sunshine,

With just a few well placed words you have captured the feelings one feels when they lose someone they love.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
Sunshine
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3 posted 05-05-2000 02:47 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

To Sudhir, Jeffrey,

Sorrow comes to one and all,
true men before it fall
strength they show when shed they a tear
heartsounds grow as they come near...

lift thy lady's eyes to thine
enfold her in your arms entwine,
her grief of loss shall never end,
but in time her heart will mend.

~~~~~

Thank you for reading...
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