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Do You Know I Love You
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Do You Know I Love You |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Do You Know If I Love You How do you know I did not hold back a potion of my love. This realm in which you think you have insight, you are lacking wisdom. The mere look of sadness upon my face, lack of gleam in my eyes, no trace of a smile that would entice you in to play. Do I jump at the sight of your presence’s, do I hover in wait of an invitation to come in to you, “think” where do you see my physical self? Do you share in what I fancy, you can’t even agree with my dislike’s. You have to prove your point to the realm of death and I am not free of you until I swear your right in all. Are you aware of any personalities I may have, could you maintain the same thoughts I have in any mind set. How could you possibly know of me, when “we” does not exist. Do you know that I love you, or is it just something you think is there because I am. I have gone to the ends of the earth to try and fix this lost cause, and I can tell you this, I have not given of myself to the very depth’s of loves realm. Now I ask you again, do you know that I have given all of my love to you? By, Cerenity |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Cerenity --- Great Job! Enjoyed reading the flow of this and the strength in it. netswan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem.Enjoyed the read.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity.....this was filled with such feeling, my friend. Very nice writing!! I know exactly how you are feeling. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ I hope you know that I care that it gets better for you. FOR YOU ! Keep to your goals, hon. I applaud your determination. 'How could you possibly know of me, when “we” does not exist.' You exist ... and don't forget it ! Love and hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cerenity~ My dear, I give you a standing ovation. I understand what you are saying dear. All too often those we care most about do take for granted that they are the end all and be all for us. But we always have a little love left. And I promise you, you will find someone who will love and know it for sure, and not think that they know you love them just because "you are there". Love Ya! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Netswan, I wish I could grasp this strength that is mentioned, thank you for your reply. Vandana, Thank you for your reply. Lone Wolf, Thank you my friend, I wish you didn't know. Marge, The word insparation comes to mind from your words, I know you care I read it in your poetry just how much you do, its people like you that keep people like me going, thank you so much. Terry, Boy do they, but I feel he does not even know what he does to me, some people will just never see how they really treat others ya know. Thank you for your kind words. Love, Cerenity |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Enjoyed reading this, though if has a strong feeling of personal expression. Hope all is well with you... dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Cerenity! You've done it dear. I love her but I had some difficulty initially in knowing something which was hidden in words but very obvious when we speak and be together. I feel your situation and I've walked in your shoes for quite sometime. But wait for the day when you both are assured that it's not going to fall apart due to some uncertainties. If its going to fall apart sometime at a future date or someone of you give up on this love,it was not mean't to be a strong relationship. Sincerely A_L |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Know you are never alone...we all here at Passions have a shoulder to lend anytime you need it. I like the determination you have shown in this piece. Continue to be strong m'friend. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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