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The Loss

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AnthonyEV1
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                      The Loss
          Written By Anthony Verzi 4/18/00

                 Why did I do this?
             How could I of been so dumb?
               When deep down inside...
                      I knew
                That you are the one
               But now I've lost you
               Because I was afriad
              Afraid of getting hurt
            Afraid of someone knowing
                    The true me
             You loved me...
                And I loved you...
            But I was too much of a fool
                      To see
            That you were the best thing
              That ever happened to me
               But now you'll move on
                  And I will stay
                Stay here loving you
                 All that my heart
                     My brain
                     My soul
                     Can love
                   Till the day
                 That I perish...
                But I swear to you
               That my last thoughts
                   Will be of you

 Just can't live that negative way...make way for the positive day"-Bob Marley.

"When the rain falls, it doesnt just fall on one man"-Bob Marley.

"" - Bob Marley


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1 posted 05-05-2000 02:44 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

We all make mistakes in life, it's part of being human. Just be sure and learn from your mistakes. This pain will slowly fade away, but alas it will go .

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep
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2 posted 05-05-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I enjoyed this, and also know this kind of pain and mistake very well.   If this is your life right now, I hope it gets better.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
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3 posted 05-05-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This is a good poem, but so sad. I hope things get better for you!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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4 posted 05-05-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Tia   Email Tia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tia

i know how you feel. i did the same thing.it was a very good poem...Bob Marley is awesome...
Tia

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5 posted 05-18-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for AnthonyEV1   Email AnthonyEV1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit AnthonyEV1's Home Page   View IP for AnthonyEV1

Hey everyone, thanks for your replies and just so you know I am doing a lot better now.  
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