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msstt
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since 2000-05-03
Posts 23
Huntington,Ind

0 posted 2000-05-04 10:05 AM


Where do I go from here.
What are the things I should do.
The things that I should say.
To let you know why.

I have so many things.
To say and show.

This comes to me so often.
Should I stay.
Or should I go.

I love you so.
I let it show.
So I should stay.
And never go.

But do you love me so.
Is it me that you would rather not see go.
Is it me that you want to be with.
Is it our love that we can let grow.
All of these I have to know.

Tricia



 

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-04 10:58 AM


Very nice poem, Tricia! Welcome to Passions!

Denise

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-05-04 02:06 PM


This one is really nice, great words flow from your pen, keep it like that so we can all enjoy ever after...

BTW, Welcome to Passions, I am searching for your first post...

Regards,
Sudhir

 In any moment of decision,
The best thing you can do is the right thing,
The next-best thing is the wrong thing,
And the worst thing you can do is nothing.
- Theodore Roosevelt

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