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Vibes of the Night Dance

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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 05-03-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Vibes of the Night Dance

your scent lingers with every breath in,
as I walk from the shadows to the shore
there at the waters edge,
the moon illuminating your pale curves
I want you even more..

a pulse of ripples flows along the dark water
as I slowly glide my way in, but
you hesitate there on the shore, listening
distant sounds across the lake, vibes
of melodies for the night dance....

the air is warm above the cooling waters,
I see your mouth glistening from the moon
lips of full desire, you go down,
beneath the water, your stroke vibrates
an undercurrent against my body

red hair silken as you emerge, deep breath,
lips wet, dripping like a passion flowing back,
to whispering waters with mellow deep sighs
occultation of our bodies, float apart,
want dissolves into eternity…..

dancers on the wings of thickened hydrogen,
lips collide, yearnings of a universe exploding
vibes permeate the naked night, water embraces
Venus merges with Mars, heavenly bodies in rhythm  
And so begins the night dance……

James Parker Haley  May 3, 2000




[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 05-03-2000).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 05-03-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

My goodness, Parker! Eloquently erotic and lovely writing, this. (and my dance card just happens to be empty...)  

~ Claire

 Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-03-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

your scent lingers with every breath in,
as I walk from the shadows to the shore
their at the waters edge,
the moon illuminating your pale curves
I want you even more..
----------------
the air is warm above the cooling waters,
I see your mouth glistening from the moon
lips of full desire, you go down,
beneath the water, your stroke vibrates
an undercurrent against my body
-------------
dancers on the wings of thickened hydrogen,
lips collide, yearnings of a universe exploding
vibes permeate the naked night, water embraces
Venus merges with Mars, heavenly bodies in rhythm  
And so begins the night dance……
---------------

*SIGH*

I believe the moon over Canada is WAY better then the one Im looking at *smile*

WOW parker-man...this is exquisite...
enticing, erotic, enchanting and excellent...
and any other ~E~ word that defines sensual and perfect.
I see Im not the only one staying up nights...insired.
VERY NICE PARKER...VERY!!
once again...you hang the moon. *S*
(and go back on that pedestal) lol
later-parker-gator...
jm
Martie
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3 posted 05-03-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wow, Parker.. what a provocative poem.  Very well written!!  I think I'll go take a swim now and cool off.
Marina
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4 posted 05-03-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

* Please Note*.....It is recomended that one wait at least two hours prior to swimming and it is important that one practice safe sex so,.... please stick to getting screwed by your company.  Just a little sick humour to brighten your day!

PS...I liked it!

Marina




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well could pick any and all of the words used to describe this from above, they all hit, but instead will just add my wow, this is beautiful....ok...ok....will add a *wishing for a passion like this...sigh*
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Parker* A.K.A. The King of Romance....This was....hmmmmmm shall I say...tantilizing or would oooozing with "Ahhhhhhhhh"...be a better description???? At any rate it's really warm in here   Time for a dip!


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Corinne
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7 posted 05-03-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Like a soft, sensuous dream, Park.

Corinne
TerryW
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8 posted 05-03-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Haleyja,
     Very seductive and powerful writing.  I love the images you generated through your words, and the mood was awesome!    Great work!




 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
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Got me back, Parker...it's going to be a very good night for a certain someone now...

mmmm.  mmmm.  mmmm.   Delicious.
Poet deVine
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10 posted 05-03-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow...this is full of such beautiful imagery! I really liked it.  
Parker
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Claire, well an offer I can't refuse, bathing suit optional of course.  

Janet, you want me to moon you, well that's kinky, and on a pedistal even.... okey dokey.

Martie, thank you, just remember bathing suit optional.  

Marina, thank you I think.

Corazon, well then come and join the fray... the water is warm....

Butterflies, dipy do da, and dipy do day.

Corinne, sometimes a dream I don't want to wake up from, sweet poet.

TerryW, thank you very much.

serenity, I'm not sure what I'm reading into this comment, and your probably not going to elaborate, so all I have to say is have fun.

Poet deVine, thank you.

Everybody thank you for your replies, now back to the water I go.

Parker


Denise
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12 posted 05-03-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very sensual and very beautifully done, Parker!

Denise
Janet Marie
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some things are even better the second time around...*smile*
just stopped by for another *sigh*...
I mean read... *L*
bttt...
Parker
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14 posted 05-04-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

denise, thank you very much.  

Janet, so I guess this means you are into multiples...  
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