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Vibes of the Night Dance
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Vibes of the Night Dance |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vibes of the Night Dance your scent lingers with every breath in, as I walk from the shadows to the shore there at the waters edge, the moon illuminating your pale curves I want you even more.. a pulse of ripples flows along the dark water as I slowly glide my way in, but you hesitate there on the shore, listening distant sounds across the lake, vibes of melodies for the night dance.... the air is warm above the cooling waters, I see your mouth glistening from the moon lips of full desire, you go down, beneath the water, your stroke vibrates an undercurrent against my body red hair silken as you emerge, deep breath, lips wet, dripping like a passion flowing back, to whispering waters with mellow deep sighs occultation of our bodies, float apart, want dissolves into eternity….. dancers on the wings of thickened hydrogen, lips collide, yearnings of a universe exploding vibes permeate the naked night, water embraces Venus merges with Mars, heavenly bodies in rhythm And so begins the night dance…… James Parker Haley May 3, 2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
My goodness, Parker! Eloquently erotic and lovely writing, this. (and my dance card just happens to be empty...)  ~ Claire< !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your scent lingers with every breath in, as I walk from the shadows to the shore their at the waters edge, the moon illuminating your pale curves I want you even more.. ---------------- the air is warm above the cooling waters, I see your mouth glistening from the moon lips of full desire, you go down, beneath the water, your stroke vibrates an undercurrent against my body ------------- dancers on the wings of thickened hydrogen, lips collide, yearnings of a universe exploding vibes permeate the naked night, water embraces Venus merges with Mars, heavenly bodies in rhythm And so begins the night dance…… --------------- *SIGH* I believe the moon over Canada is WAY better then the one Im looking at *smile* WOW parker-man...this is exquisite... enticing, erotic, enchanting and excellent... and any other ~E~ word that defines sensual and perfect. I see Im not the only one staying up nights...insired.  VERY NICE PARKER...VERY!! once again...you hang the moon. *S* (and go back on that pedestal) lol later-parker-gator... jm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow, Parker.. what a provocative poem. Very well written!! I think I'll go take a swim now and cool off. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
* Please Note*.....It is recomended that one wait at least two hours prior to swimming and it is important that one practice safe sex so,.... please stick to getting screwed by your company. Just a little sick humour to brighten your day! PS...I liked it! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well could pick any and all of the words used to describe this from above, they all hit, but instead will just add my wow, this is beautiful....ok...ok....will add a *wishing for a passion like this...sigh* |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Parker* A.K.A. The King of Romance....This was....hmmmmmm shall I say...tantilizing or would oooozing with "Ahhhhhhhhh"...be a better description???? At any rate it's really warm in here Time for a dip! Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Like a soft, sensuous dream, Park. Corinne |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Haleyja, Very seductive and powerful writing. I love the images you generated through your words, and the mood was awesome! Great work! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Got me back, Parker...it's going to be a very good night for a certain someone now... mmmm. mmmm. mmmm. Delicious. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...this is full of such beautiful imagery! I really liked it.  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, well an offer I can't refuse, bathing suit optional of course. Janet, you want me to moon you, well that's kinky, and on a pedistal even.... okey dokey. Martie, thank you, just remember bathing suit optional. Marina, thank you I think. Corazon, well then come and join the fray... the water is warm.... Butterflies, dipy do da, and dipy do day. Corinne, sometimes a dream I don't want to wake up from, sweet poet. TerryW, thank you very much. serenity, I'm not sure what I'm reading into this comment, and your probably not going to elaborate, so all I have to say is have fun. Poet deVine, thank you. Everybody thank you for your replies, now back to the water I go. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sensual and very beautifully done, Parker! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
some things are even better the second time around...*smile* just stopped by for another *sigh*... I mean read... *L* bttt... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
denise, thank you very much. Janet, so I guess this means you are into multiples...  |
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