»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Beyond the rolling hills
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Beyond the rolling hills |
|
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697
|
Beyond my small world Beyond this house, this street This little town Beyond the rolling hills That seem to touch the sky He is waiting for me Will he have to come to me Or will I come to him? I don't know this, all I know Is that someday, we will meet Oh, and what a day that will be I might not know it's him right away But then we'll start talking And I'll look into those eyes And I'll know And we'll love each other With a love that defies description A love that doesn't die with life A love that doesn't fade It might be tomarrow Or a hundred years from now But I know that day will come But until that day arrives I'll keep on hoping And know that there's someone special And a whole other world Beyond the rolling hills "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Erica N. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Touching, Lovebug. Corinne |
||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, there is a whole world waiting for you, and there is someone special for you. But always remember the the rainbow's end is right there at your kitchen door. Never forget those things that you hold dear. No matter where you go, they'll always be in your heart. Your writing is so beautiful. I love the thoughts in this poem. I especially love the first verse Liz |
||
|
Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC |
Ah, it sounds like you await the arrival of your "soulmate." Many people don't believe what you've descibed here can really happen. But it can and does. It may mean "practicing patience" for a decade or two, but *believe me* he'll have been worth the wait once you find him. ;-) |
||
|
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Corinne- I'm glad it touched you Liz- I know the value of my world here, thank you for reminding me, and for the compliments Brandyn- Like you, I believe that everyone has a soulmate, and I'll be glad to wait for mine. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoveBug~ Without a doubt, hon ... we all have a soulmate. This is a beautiful poem with such loving thoughts expressed by your heart. Love ya', gal !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very beautiful, LoveBug! Denise |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LoveBug, Some where, some time, some how. Bless you. |
||
|
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge- Thanks for the nice reply. Yes, we all have someone out there... Denise- Thanks a lot! Seymour- Yes, I believe that, too. Thanks for replying. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
||
|
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovebug -------This is just poignant. So sweet, so hopeful. yes, he is there -------and he is looking for you------ netswan |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
