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A Simple Thank-you, My Friend - A Sonnet

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warmhrt
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0 posted 04-26-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for warmhrt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for warmhrt

Into the dim lit, bare walls of my world,
You entered, bringing light and life to me,
The vivid colors, painted with a swirl
Of wit and charm, of personality,
With tender care, you added comfort, warmth,
And images that line the now bright walls.
I look upon them fondly, bringing forth
A thankfulness that you walk in these halls
With me; our friendship has become a part
Of my world now; it has it's special place,
Within my being, life, and in my heart,
Your name hangs right beside your smiling face.
Rememb'ring just how drab these walls had been,
I have to thank you for the light, my friend.
                                          
Kristine

P.S. I posted this in CA under an alias to see if I would recieve the same responses as I do using my name...it is my own original writing...I promise.


 the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare


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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 04-26-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Great Lines Kristine!!!!

Thoroughly enjoyed the impressionalism!

regards,
sudhir

 Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski
Cerenity
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2 posted 04-27-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi warmhrt,

This is a beautiful thank you to your friend, really nice.

Cerenity
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3 posted 05-13-2004 03:27 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

precious write
warmhrt
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4 posted 05-14-2004 08:29 PM       View Profile for warmhrt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for warmhrt

Thank you sudir, Cerenity, and especially passing shadows. The fact that someone still takes the time to read and comment on this poem means much to me. Again...thank you.

Kris

"It is wisdom to know others;
It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu
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5 posted 05-14-2004 10:03 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kristine~
This is a stunningly lovely sonnet~
I am so appreciative to DixieDoodleBug for digging in the archives once more~

Nice to see you in with a reply, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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warmhrt
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6 posted 05-15-2004 10:27 PM       View Profile for warmhrt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for warmhrt

Marge,

Thanks so much for your kind words. Yes, it's been a while since I've been here. So nice to hear from you, Marge...I consider you one of the ultimate poetesses, which makes your responce even more meaningful. Thank you,

Kris

"It is wisdom to know others;
It is enlightenment to know one's self" - Lao Tzu
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