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sweetchild
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since 2000-04-19
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0 posted 2000-04-24 03:42 PM


I was told always to write from my heart,
It's blooming with feelings, where do I start?
I know that pen and paper will never do,
As I try to express this feeling so new.

My heart is light,
My head heavy no more,
And in this night,
I feel I can SOAR!

Captive released,
I have broken free,
Exultant now
Unleashed from misery.

There is no pain,
My last, I have cried,
Sorrows banished,
Tears are dried.

Blissful heaven,
Ecstasy;
This joy, this happiness
Is growing in me.

I know it will end,
Though I'll die when it stops
I pray, plea, BEG
Let me never wake up.

© Copyright 2000 sweetchild - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 2000-04-24 06:19 PM


Welcome to passion!!!! Nice poem.
sweetchild
Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37

2 posted 2000-04-25 06:49 AM


Thanx for your reply, I really appreciate it, your one of the first to welcome me here  

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