navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Everyone is a Poet
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Everyone is a Poet Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington

0 posted 2000-04-24 11:08 AM


Everyone in Here is a Poet

In this forum, poets reign
a metaphor - a rhymetic song
broken hearts and mended ones

haiku - (just learned that name)
the metronome buzz of words - sonnets
a plenty -- taste like golden
honey

hearts pour out their painful sorrow
mothers and fathers puff out words of pride
poets write of hope for tomorrow


Death doth walk in these forum
doors -- while the hurt of an
ending - nevermore

Joy flows through here with
bustling vigor --and tears
awash from life's injustices

A funny ditty or a poem with
a clever twist some for sure
are written by poetic lunatics --)

Tributes enter here aplenty
to artists and to new net friends
a place where one can pretend

Or pour the truth of life and
bleeding hearts -Tales of woe - and
angry foes are just a start

Some use perfect metric
rhyme others freestyle their
mystic words sublime

Some spend hours on a written
line while some hastily write
what's on their mind

Each is a heart that is spoken
true reaching with words to
those that share - like you.


netswan
April 18, 2000



[This message has been edited by netswan (edited 04-24-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Teresa King - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
1 posted 2000-04-24 11:24 AM


How wonderfully said, Netswan!

Cor

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-04-24 11:53 AM


So true, Teresa! Poetry encompasses a wide spectrum. Very well stated!

Denise

Corazon
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

3 posted 2000-04-24 12:51 PM


yep, perfect poetic picture  
rene
Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113

4 posted 2000-04-24 12:54 PM


only just joined but sure seems that way right now
brandondinsmore
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142
OKC, OK
5 posted 2000-04-24 01:08 PM


Maybe I am just odd, bu I read sarcasm in this one...Indeed, many people accredit themselves with poetic skills that they do not posess...I might consider myself a poet, but is that really my decision?  Can I really make that claim?  Yes and no; those are correct answers.

This forum has many great writers, and many hobbyists.  I read a lot into this one, and appreciate it greatly.

netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
6 posted 2000-04-24 10:27 PM


Thanks everyone for your
great replies.
Brandon -- this has no sarcasm
in it at all --- I am glad you
liked it.

netswan  

Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
7 posted 2000-04-24 10:30 PM


I'd say you summed it up very neatly, netswan. We're just like an arsenal. There may be a lot of calibers but we all shoot straight....good work.
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
8 posted 2000-04-24 10:37 PM



Well written netswan   It's hard to say how many of us actually feel like poets but it's nice to share with others the words of our hearts and not be judged for what comes out.


 Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.


Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
9 posted 2000-04-24 10:41 PM


Excellent netswan. . . everyone is indeed a poet, some of us just use words. . . some use a brush, others, a voice. . . we all express ourselves in our own way. . . we all have the poet within us. . .how we express it, is up to us. . .

-------------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lady Web
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96
Houston, Texas
10 posted 2000-04-24 10:48 PM


DITTO, with svens reply I couldn't have said it better than that.

 

53

Jeffrey Carter
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!
11 posted 2000-04-25 04:06 AM


I agree with Sven on this one.

All my love,
Jeffrey

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Everyone is a Poet

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary