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rene
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since 2000-04-24
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0 posted 2000-04-24 01:13 PM


leather are the seasoned skies
with clouds like tides both strong and deep
wherein lies dreams the waves of sleep
and neon monsters gently prowl surplanting seeds of sacred truth
with secret and suggestive sounds
to set afloat the ships of youth

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brandondinsmore
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1 posted 2000-04-24 01:17 PM


Rene, you have my attention.  Please explain this one.  I like it much.
rene
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2 posted 2000-04-24 01:27 PM


i guess its kind of about the awakening of sexuality that we presume happens once in youth and is then over with when really an attitude to sexuality changes according to your present emotion and so i guess we all sould stop dreaming about everything being simple and wake up the the dark reality of what we want
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