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brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

0 posted 2000-04-23 12:28 PM

Poem:

Mountains. Curved apparitions.
Scaling.
As touch embraces thee,
Calm ensues.
With rapid pleasure,
Calm ensues.
The staff of divinity nestles close.
Love heathens, the two of you.

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-23 11:54 PM

Okay Brandon. I confess, I read this
one about 30 minutes ago, and did not
respond. Not because it wasn't good,
but because I didn't want to put my
foot in my mouth (an easy thing for
me to do --)

OKAY here goes.
I hope this poem is about two mountains
standing tall next to each other --if
it is IT is a very lovely poem.
The title could be  Two Peaks, or Two
Mountains  Or  Mountains in Love.

But POEM  hmmm,  not a clue.

netswan

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

2 posted 2000-04-24 01:05 PM

Ummm...well, it is called 'Poem' simply because that is what it is...a simple poem, a writing expressing my feelings...
It is about love, and yes, a woman, and most undoubtedly...me.
I wrote it to express my feelings toward a woman's gentle touch of me...and other things [I can't inscribe here.].

rene
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since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

3 posted 2000-04-24 01:08 PM

b i think you have a special, thats what the poem suggests anyway

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-04-24 10:54 PM

As touch embraces thee,
Calm ensues.
With rapid pleasure,
Calm ensues.
The staff of divinity nestles close.
----------------
very deep poem...
and sensual too...
*sigh*

very nice read!!
take care jm

Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2000-04-24 11:30 PM

Words written from the heart and feelings sent out from the soul....poetry at its finest. And by the way...titles often elude me...ask anyone....lol

Hold me for yesterday
Kiss me for tomorrow
But love me for today.

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

6 posted 2000-04-24 11:37 PM

B...simple yet powerfully said...this is a fine example of your talent.

All my love,
Jeffrey

brandondinsmore
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since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

7 posted 2000-04-25 09:15 AM

much thanks be to you all, especially the quoter of my previous lines....thank you much.

brandondinsmore
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 142
OKC, OK

8 posted 2000-04-25 09:24 AM

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