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A Lust for the Unattainable.
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A Lust for the Unattainable. |
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brandondinsmore Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 142OKC, OK |
Sweetness in your voice …Blood fills me… Boldness in your stride …Thickens… Your complexion, defined …Urges build… Movements of soft finesse, Your eyes penetrate my heart’s desire. Your presence tickles my inside fire. Sleek beauty in debonair I dare say I could love you Panic builds as I perspire The realization…you’re unattainable. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yeah, I know how this feels! Got that "desire of what we probably cannot have" down pat in this poem! Corinne |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Do we want it more because we can't have it? Thought provoking...  |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
I know the feelings you write of~ You have a beautiful piece here~ Marie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this..a lot..James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done! I enjoyed this poem. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
You've captured some truth in this. Nice piece. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Nice poem, sensed the desire in your writing (been there) A thought to ponder This feelings of yours seems quite nice but think of the cost whats the price for to indulge in your paradise today may lead to tomorrows dismay P.S. Or Not.. 53 |
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