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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-04-22 09:06 PM


It's Really Me

I fell off the wall rolled down the hill
what a hill it was never ending down,
oh no, how do I get back up climb
ha, ha through all that muck and mud?

Gotta be another way I humbly say
for the mud all over me is enough already,
I don't even know if a shower can remove
so maybe I'll just say I have a new makeup.

All right problem still exists how too elevate
hey, there's a mule maybe I can ride him
wonderful thought but he won't even move
kicked him in the side and he said, hee, haw.

My golly it's getting windy down here in valley
of course wind blowing wrong direction too help
I'm looking up, up, up what do I see up there
hey, I see me, it's me up there, it's really me.




[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-22-2000).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-04-22 09:27 PM


even a mule can bring us out of the valley right? I would love a knight on a white horse thought. I liked this one!

 Kathleen


Denise
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2 posted 2000-04-23 11:00 PM


'Looking up' is the best way to find ourselves on the mountaintop! This is full of wisdom, Gloria!

Denise

Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-04-24 07:46 AM


Iris Rose: Thank You, glad you liked it. I would have loved your knight idea too.  

Denise: Thanks for reading and your reply.  

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-04-24 07:49 AM


very creative miss dreamer i likes!
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