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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-04-22 12:46 PM



A Change Is Good

To see the suited man
in a pair of jeans, what a
sweet treat.

For a child to clean there
room with out asking,
a mothers delight.

For the sun to shine on
that very special day you’ve
planed , when the weather
man predicts rain.

For the car to go on
total fumes until you find
the right price to pay
for gas.

For the well trained puppy
to stay well trained
when you leave for the
day.

To go to work “happy”
and come home
“happy” too.

To find stashed money
when Mac & Cheese
is the only thing in the
house.

To find out on your
own what the problem
is with your computer
and be able to
fix it too.

To be able to do what you like the most
(Like writing Poetry)
and being able to share it with others,
and know that what you like
is OK  because it comes from
your heart.

By,  Cerenity



© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
1 posted 2000-04-22 01:08 AM


I like it a lot Cerenity... I know a lot of the feelings there )

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-04-22 01:15 AM


What a great Poem ---Cerenity, thank you =
yes it is wonderful to remember to
count our blessings ------lots of
memories here

netswan

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-04-22 12:26 PM


Hi Cuddlez and netswan,

Thank you for your kind replys, someones poem sparked this and it is good for the soul to remember just how blessed we our because some times we forget and find our selfs longing for more when we really just need to be thankful for what we have.

Cerenity

Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

4 posted 2000-04-22 10:56 PM


Nicely written.  Enjoyed your poem.
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-04-23 12:21 PM


Very good, Cerenity! I enjoyed this!

Denise

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-04-23 12:39 PM


Right on!  
Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
7 posted 2000-04-23 09:52 AM


Hi,  Mike-  Denise- WhtDove,

It was wonderful to here your kinds words.
Thank you very much,

Cerenity

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

8 posted 2000-04-23 09:59 AM


Cerenity...Alright Girl!!! loved this  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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