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Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362

0 posted 2000-04-21 01:18 AM


Old Flames
Can burned bridges ever be crossed?
And if so at what cost?
I told you once, I'll tell you again
I still love you
But you love someone else
I can see it in your glance
The way you talk about this girl
Like stars are shining in your eyes
So go to her my dear
No longer bound to me
But remember my love,
That's a burned bridge you'll cross
And that will be the end of us
Go to her if you will be happy
I set you free
But if you come back,
It was meant to be

~Cuddlez~

[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 04-21-2000).]

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Temptress
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Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-04-21 02:56 AM


Nicely written.   Letting go is difficult sometimes, but also the right thing to do at times.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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2 posted 2000-04-21 11:16 AM


Thanks Temptress... and serentity sorry i posted the same poem twice everyone.

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2000-04-21 11:21 AM


Sometimes you have to let go, to deal with the pain on your own. Hugs to you dear...It's never easy...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


Cuddlez
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4 posted 2000-04-22 01:23 AM


How can I say goodbye?
I know I'm going to cry....
He still hasn't figured whats what exactly though.

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-04-22 01:28 AM


Sweet Poem - of lost love. --
It is nice to see that you want to set
that person free, but sad that you
have left the bridge open. I would have
burned it up ---)

You take care.  Time heals this stuff,
it really does.

hugs from netswan

Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
6 posted 2000-04-22 02:02 AM


Oh he knows if he chooses her its over between us...
I'm firm on this one
She's an old ex-girlfriend and the feelings are there but they are still there for me
I'm letting him figure it out.. Make sense?

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