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Faking It |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Sure it shines diamond-like, upon your long and lovely finger, but the gold is flaking on your skin, and that green will surely linger. You apply makeup carefully, a mask of porcelain beauty, but if you crack a genuine smile, it will fall away completely. Most people will not see you, unless the angle is just right, like in peripheral vision, the angle is wide, not tight. Like an ever-changing hologram, now and then the viewer will see, a momentary flash of horror, a she-demon in a sci-fi movie. I marvel at how you use men, when your bloated ego needs a fix, if they won’t take your smelly bait, you lay even greater tricks. I don’t want to feed the fire, by letting you know, I know. hope that mask melts one day then the real witch will show. © 2000 CM Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well now, did someone piss Corrine off today? Great poem. Jeffrey |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
ROFL!!! Perfect response, Jeffrey! Corinne |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I really liked this....it is so real to life and so easy to understand... I think we have all seen this kind of person at sometime in our lives. A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You just tell it like it is, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, First Knight - it is frustrating when people can't see through someone's outward persona. Yeah, Marge, ain't that the truth! LOL Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OUCH!!!! Come on Corinne...dont sugar coat your words.. say what ya really feel. LOL excellent poem...read like a stinging slap in the face. remind me never to make Corinne mad  take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Well, what can I say I like the flow, and peom itself......... but what I really what to say is....Cat Fight!. Parker |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There are so many out there that fool everybody. But they can't fool the Man upstairs! Good poem, Corinne! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting...so many people are fakes..and when you try to be honest and sincere they use it against you. James |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
JM - never was one for that sugary coated stuff!!! And thanks! Parker - thanks and meow "All four claws for now withdrawn" - Joni Mitchell Denise and James, - yes wouldn't it be nice if we were all just plain old honest, no games? Thank you. Corinne |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You know that witch too, eh???..  Write on, Corinne!! |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wow, don't know who your witch is, but sure in the heck am glad you can see her . --------Meow Corrine' got claws. Keep on writing. This is very well done. Back to the Top netswan |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Nan and Netswan! Got this urge to scratch my nails down something! LOL Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*approaching very carefully. . . * Corinne? Did we have a bad day? Now, just hand over the coffee...and we can talk about this.. . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Aw, Corinne, I'm with Sven--I happen to have it on very good authority that the wicked witch had a very BAD week! (puddles, everywhere...) Thanks for the fun! |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
ouch, indeed  Rick |
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