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0 posted 2004-12-29 02:11 PM



I pursue love and lust
As if they were one,
Entwine within my mind,
Demons disguise as thoughts,

Fever of lust binds me now-
More than ever I tremble-
Day after day,
Year after year I suffer,

Where lies the cure?
I look towards the heaven,
And seek some remedy,
Pushed aside by the winds,
As If I am ill gotten,

Darkness engulfs me,
Closing the path to hope,
I sit and wait for the end,
The time when I leave-
And start my journey
All over again

I sob frantically,
As if I was raped,
My soul out in the open,
Left for demons to feed upon,
Not an ounce of strength I can muster,

Who do I call now?
Where do I fall now?
When will these wounds heal?
And wicked thoughts leave?

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2004 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2004-12-29 03:59 PM


I think that you describe "Lust" and helplessnes very well here. Thanks, as you have written here, for putting your soul out in the open. Good job. -Bob
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 2000-04-06
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Small Town, Somewhere
2 posted 2005-01-13 11:12 PM


^.^

You did a fair job of describing "lust".  I look forward to reading more of what you've posted around.


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