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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
winter is coming i can feel it soon there will be snowflakes on my tongue i'll lap them up dramatically just as i did when I was young some shun the cold and snow some curse the winter wind but I crave the solstice frost and in the darkness I begin for I was born on solstice night a darkling child of the snow and though my desitny not fully me the desires in me grow to sweep the world in forst and snow to make it shine in icy hand to cover all the world with cold light with the North wind in my hands... i feel alive again its true... as i smell snow upon the air and long to find her in my arms... my lover and my friend winter....burns within my heart its holy purifying fire no mercy in its ice filled love no compassion in her ire but i shall meet the winter with my arms held open wide and we shall march through another season hand in hand and side by side... " and I dream of her always, |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I like this...it's very vibrant and vivid. Like a painting with strong colours and powerful brushstrokes. If that makes any sense. *Climbs back into the loony bin* |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I enjoyed your poem. Brought back memories of catching snowflakes and also a very painful one of trying to lick frost off of a wagon wheel when I was about 5 years old. Of course my tongue stuck to the metal and when I jerked away all of the skin went too! OUCH! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm a hothouse child but I can feel your enthusiasm for the ice and snow. Very vivid. Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
 pretty poem! i love it! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You capture winter very well and it seems your not to bad at capturing snow flakes as well. I really enjoyed the feel of your poem. Thanks for sharing some memories. -Bob |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Well, I'm a little bit early, but... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!  Truly enjoyed your poem...it gave me a cool feeling!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's been a while since I've been in Corner Pub... and I wish you'd post more in Open...  such a pleasure to read you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Sol! I'd personally rather be in Florida and never see another snow flake again, but I can appreciate others' love for it.  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Loving it Sol I don't know that I'd compare your inner fire to the icy cold of winters though... *hugs* |
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