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Alnilam
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since 2003-07-04
Posts 75


0 posted 2003-08-09 08:09 PM


If anyone has any suggestions for a title please feel free to tell me. I dont want to alter this much though because its really special to me the way it is.


I need not see the stars at night
Or cry alone in dim moonlight
I need not build up walls of brick
Or feel the pain of a heart so sick
I need not wonder what might be
Or worry that you will hurt me
I need not think bad things at all
For I found the one who wont let me fall

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

© Copyright 2003 Alnilam - All Rights Reserved
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

1 posted 2003-08-10 08:21 AM


Sounds like a prayer that has been answered. Lucky you. Maggie
gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
Posts 189

2 posted 2003-08-10 11:18 PM


Lucky for you- dont let this person go anywhere! a lovely read.
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