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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-09 10:35 PM


Subjective

Women may complain men aren't reliable;
Men may complain the very same thing.
Women may say men easily get jealous;
Men may say women are too sensitive.

Women may think men's mind is hard to reach;
Men may think women's heart is mystery.
Women may say men are aloof;
Men may say women are sophisticated.

Women and men, both could have the same personality.
Women and men, both try to figure out the other, yet
Yet putting them in group don't help a bit,
For each woman and man is unique.

We each is unique creation of God.
No men is the same; no women is the same.
Yet it is hard to be objective.
The first person to confess is me.

I, often prejudged men.
Somehow my impression of men is a bad one.
I cannot help but think
No one will love me true.

Yet I'm trying
To vanish this image.
Yet those images
Keep coming back at me.

I, often distrust men.
Somehow my impression of men is an aweful one.
I cannot help but think
No men on earth is good.

(c) Aug 9, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-08-10 03:19 PM


The old battle of the senses.  but it is well not to prejudge all on the basis of one.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2003-08-10 04:59 PM


Eliza:  I'm sorry you have had such bad experiences with men.  There really are some good ones around.  I married one of them!

Betty Lou Hebert

gringakiwi
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3 posted 2003-08-10 11:21 PM


This poem made me so sad for you! Keep your heart and eyes open- love could be around the next corner!
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