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Akiras_fire
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 7
The Middle of nowhere

0 posted 2003-06-28 12:02 PM


Life is a dream
Be careful my friend
Things aren’t always
As they seem

Life's dreams are shattered
Not that it ever mattered
Life's road is hard and long
I'm terrified of this dark song
It's darkness is near
And I can feel the fear
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written by akira
copyright 2002

Wonderful Work
Akiras_fire@yahoo.com

© Copyright 2003 akira - All Rights Reserved
junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
1 posted 2003-06-28 03:14 AM


akira,
this one expresses my fears of life too. i enjoyed it so much.its very well written and thought out.

hugs from june xxxxx

2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2003-06-28 07:30 AM


Reminds me of the saying: An optimist thinks that this is the best possible world. A pessimist fears that this is true.

Welcome to PIP.

Melton

midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2003-06-28 11:56 AM


Dear Akira,

for a mmt i thought that u were someone else. great poem! short, sweet, and very very down-to-earth. i like it! hope to c more of ur works

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Akiras_fire
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since 2003-04-29
Posts 7
The Middle of nowhere
4 posted 2003-06-28 05:58 PM


i have posted here before but my membership expired or something i didnt use it for months and had to re-apply
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