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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Something new came to me though at first i knew not its heart yet it held in it familiar stuffs and now with it I cannot part She is a woman fair and bold like heroic women of anicent old who in the stories often told fall for men unlikely.... Now I am unlikely sad but true and like so many , even you I've endeavored often late to make within my heart...good fate yet this time when i tried I failed not because i young manly male faltered in my steps of three but because work was done for me she came to me with one small plea love me BEST, love JUST ME everything else my heart attends but i will not be a ' kissing friend ' what could I do? what could i say? what would drive her or make her stay? i felt my heart and heard my mind they moved as one, with NEED, in time " I love you , have for years ' i said and though it caused her fear ' I love you now, I love you BEST ' and partially her fears addressed " You love me now, but will you when?" " Time will prove me kissing friend " " I'll not take that so do not lie " " I love you..just love ME " I smiled at her, because I knew that I loved her, she loved me too pledged my heart and love through Time and found my Destiny turned on a dime to be continued.... " and I dream of her always, |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
I know its been awhile and my skills are off....hopefully i'll get back up to speed...but today..I had to write *G* " and I dream of her always, |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I smiled at her, because I knew that I loved her, she loved me too pledged my heart and love through Time and found my Destiny turned on a dime Good for you. Melton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Ooh I love a good love story, i hope it jst gets better and bete. good job. Joyce |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Great write....I liked it! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow great write Adam! I'll be lookin forward to the sequel!!! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this! lots~ |
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TheGoalie Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny |
I liked this poem. At least someone is having luck in love. Good write. hope to see more. "Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef" |
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