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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Tapping on My Pen Tapping, Tapping... My pen with my fingers, Waiting, Waiting, My palms start sweating. The more I think, the more I'm mad. Mad about all wasted contribution. I don't even know why I care so much About this project As though none dust should be found. Tapping, Tapping... My pen with my fingers, Waiting, Waiting, My palms start sweating. Sweating is my tears. I just can't handle this All by myself. I need you to be co-operative with me. Perhaps I am a perfectionist, Perhaps I don't know how to weigh priority of tasks, But I am serious In getting score and details. So come and join me, if you like. You can sit still all day, Yet don't disturb my writing For my thoughts process exist only At the moment of inspiration. Oh, please don't say I love hard work. I have headache in organizing ideas And pull the whole project together. I am afraid of interviewing, Yet I lead cause I want good marks. What's more crucial, Is that It is a perfect way of learning. (c)June 11,2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. ~Yesterday insult, today gain. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (06-12-2003 02:15 AM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Eliza, you are certainly getting very good at putting your feelings into your writings. You have come a long way! Good for you. But, do try to watch your spelling.I think that you meant you were "tapping" on your pen. Not "taping" which would mean you were putting tape around it. I have made these type of spelling mistakes myself, so now I keep my dictionary right here in a little cubby hole in my computer desk. One tiny mistake....and I have put the wrong meaning in a whole poem of my own!! That's how we learn though and I applaud you for keeping up with your writing. hugs, Chris  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, this is very well expressed! im impressed dear girl *huGz* love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: This is an interesting poem and I like the way you have expressed yourself. I was glad to see Nightshade point out the difference between tapping and taping. I assumed you meant tapping and read it that way. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Thanks Chris. I use a word spell checker and it didn't pick the error up. Now it is fixed. Eliza Simmons |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Eliza - I am glad that you didn't feel offended by me pointing out a spelling error. Your writing has come such a long way...I just didn't want a missing letter to spoil your poem. You go girl!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hehe Chris, you must have forgotten my poem "Yesterday Insult, Today Gain" Your comments are far from insult, actually, I found it is a compliment So why would I be upset about it?Eliza Simmons |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just when words escape us they come back again and bring their friends. Lovely Joyce |
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