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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-28 06:14 PM


Knots (Repost from Dark Poetry)

My bedroom is colored with a pink lipstick.
Across my pillows is my dear dresser
Where I wear some pinkish power on my cheeks.
I put on a pale blue dress with some laces
As I stare at the pink oval shape box on the table.
I open the box with a deep breath
And count the earrings you've once given me.
I pull out a string and hang them on;
For each pair of earrings I make a knot.
I place the string across the mirror,
Then suddenly the knots are gone.
The string breaks and sound of drops everywhere.
I must have not tighten up the knots very well.
As I hear the drops I feel relief in my heart.

(c)Nov 13, 2001
Eliza Simmons

(Don't know whether you like my works to be reposted... this is an older work of mine)

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2003-05-29 12:38 PM


Dear Eliza,

as a matter of fact i do like this... very much!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
2 posted 2003-05-29 06:32 PM


i found this intrigueing and enjoyed the imagery of it.
hugs from june x

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-05-29 06:37 PM


Lots of imagery here.  Love, Joyce
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