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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-27 10:08 PM


Moment of Silence

Through all the dark time,
I saw a group of angels,
Guiding me through the mist.

They-
Reach out for my hands,
While-
I was drowning.

They-
Include my parents,
While-
You poets
Are among them, too.

They are-
Pastor, brother, Mom and Dad, and my online friends,
While-
You my
Best friend are also included.

They are-
Pastor, brother, Mom and Dad, my online friends, and my best friend,
While-
You my
Doctor and nurse can't be left uncounted.

They are everyone who once had
Shown me any kindness,
From helping me tie shoes
When I was a child,
From picking a coin,
That belonged to mine,
From comforting words,
To a smile on your face.

Thank you, angels of my life.
Someday, I will help you in return.
Thank you, for not giving up on me.
Someday, we may go different paths.
But I know who has touched me.

(Speaking)
***There is a time in the show,
Where the star has to give thanks.
It is better to name each or
Is it better to name none?
Either way, it is impossible to name all.
So now my turn, as I accending to the shore
From the sea below.
I would like to sing this song
To all who has shown me
Any kindness or criticism,
Whether you're aware of it or not.***

(Micphone)
(So what would you like to say about your life?)
(Testing... testing...
I would like to say...
I would like to say I blessed with angels on earth)

Side note:Repeat the whole song, up to but not include micphone

(c)April 27, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2003-04-28 02:17 PM


I would like to say: very thought-provoking peom!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-05-01 03:14 PM


Eliza~
You have such a beautifully caring imagination~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-05-01 04:10 PM


I'm proud to be counted among those who may have helped you.  You have come a long way since you first started posting.  Love, Joyce
junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
4 posted 2003-05-01 05:11 PM


oh that is so lovely. i too have a host of those angels to thank.
beautiful idea, lovely poem.

hugs from june x

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-05-04 01:42 AM


Enjoyed...James
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Member Patricius
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6 posted 2003-05-05 05:04 PM


Eliza:  This is so caring and thoughtful! It is a pleasure to know you through your poetry and the e-mails we exchange!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
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SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW
7 posted 2003-05-07 09:33 PM


very beautiful!

there are 2 ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it. -unknown

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-05-09 02:00 PM


very creative
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