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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Road Compassion Just when you think it's the end of the road, Please look up to the sky for its endless curve. When you feel the sun is too bright, Please find some wind as your solace. And if the sky rain in sympathy, Please let it washes away your tears. After all, showers under the sky Is a blessing, a sign to filfill thirst. After all, sunny day slaps you awake And to more... more courageous... Just when you think grey storms is up heading, Please look for a cloud shapes like a roof. Stop drinking that bitter wine and thoughts, Please let the invisible umberalla help you. And though you can't see the work being done, Please knowing that you're safe from the storm. After all, thunders doesn't strike on your back, And you aren't frozen under the creepy weather. After all, the roof of the sky show its strength, Don't you know that God's taking care of you. Just when you think it's the end of the road, Please understand it's an opportune to inherit- Compassion. (c)April 30, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
i really like this. i can tell you put a lot of thought into it. i especially like the end: After all, thunders doesn't strike on your back, And you aren't frozen under the creepy weather. After all, the roof of the sky show its strength, Don't you know that God's taking care of you. Just when you think it's the end of the road, Please understand it's an opportune to inherit- excellent work!!! peaceful_dreamer |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks. I'm glad you like it. Eliza Simmons |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Good subject matter and you have written it well. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
 oh your compliment makes me happy, cuz it is from youEliza Simmons |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eliza, I really like this. There's a lot of truth in it. I especially liked the first verse..... Just when you think it's the end of the road, Please look up to the sky for its endless curve Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, I was feeling quite down and your poem made me feel better. thanks Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Ethel, I'm glad you like it Michelle, I'm glad it cheer you up. Eliza Simmons |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Beautiful!  I enjoyed this one immensely!  --Jamie "...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice and cheerful. I like this one. Joyce |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
i like this eliza a very true and positive poem. hugs from june x |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Thanks Jamie! For such compliment Thanks Joyce and June! Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ 'sunny day slaps you awake' ...and I *smile*~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Marge, your reply is always lovely Eliza Simmons |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Hey there,aries...a very thought-provokingly positive offering here.Very nice. "Road Compassion"? Sounds like"Street Heart" to me... (wink)Peace,S.H. |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
my favourite lines : "Just when you think grey storms is up heading, Please look for a cloud shapes like a roof. Stop drinking that bitter wine and thoughts, Please let the invisible umberalla help you." A beautiful optimistic poem.... I adore it! love, Claire xx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! wow! |
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