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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-02-28 01:00 PM



Verbal Vortex

~*Marge Tindal*~

Swirl the thought
Twirl it around
Verbal vortex
Without
Sound
All
Of
Me
In poetr
y
Verbal vortex
Of all that I am
Swirling, whirling
Worded-Twirl down



*Inspired by a game of Scrabble with my Bill~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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1 posted 2003-02-28 04:01 PM


Very creative, Marge! Love it!
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2 posted 2003-02-28 05:13 PM


Dear Marge:  Another outstanding piece! I love to play Scrabble but hard to find anyone to play with me.  I went to a vortex area once in Oregon and it is a really weird experience!  It's in southern Oregon, near Jacksonville.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-02-28 05:41 PM


Denise~
Thank you ... I have soooooooo much fun with 'words'~

BettyLou~
Ohhhhhhhhh, Scrabble is a PASSION with me too !
I wish we could play !
Come on down .... bring Ron and we'll have a blast !
(Pssssssst, Bill and I now play two or three games a day ...)
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-02-28 06:12 PM


Yes you do have fun with words.  This is clever.  Joyce
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5 posted 2003-02-28 07:49 PM


another clever write I seldom play with words for I'm not good in word play or in English. I hope someday I can play with you, but you have to teach me.

~Every girl has a dream within.

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6 posted 2003-03-05 11:23 PM


a delightful depiction of the mind at work.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-03-10 10:13 AM


Joyce~
I just LOVE tiptoeing through the thesaurus~

Eliza~
Hey gal ... you do okay yourself~
Take a new word each day and let it flow though your quill~
Not sure I can 'teach' it ... but hopefully I can enlighten others to try~

Pegasus~
Thankee for dropping in on my thought processes~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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