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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Am In-Spiraled ~*Marge Tindal*~ Spiraling turning around up the downside of up down the upslide of down outside the rim of inside out circling within this roundabout fast closing in on too close again searching for my elf of self not wishing to be placed upon the back shelf life in a tailspin of spiraling again ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge - You never cease to amaze me with your design as well as your words!  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
hehe..I like it ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This conjured up visions of flying kites at the beach! I love it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
made me dizzy but I like it the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all soooooooo much~ Sometimes my ink soars me through a myriad of word-thoughts ! I soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo appreciate all of you ! Honest Injun ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Marge, you're just spiraling away there. Lovely. Joyce |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-sis---I sometimes feel this way...as if in emotional whirlwind..you have written it.  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
"up the downside of up" "life in a tailspin" Mm! Really cool, Marge. I'm not sure I understand the purpose of highlighting some words at the end of the lines though, is that deliberate, or just for the hell of it? -Lynne Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Thanks for getting caught up in my 'swirls'~ MartieSis~ Yeppers .... we know these feelings well, eh ? Love you~ YuLan~ Well ... let's see ... I'm reaching for my diplomatic phrasing here ... Duh ! I had TWO CRAYONS ? It was DEFINITELY NOT quote:AND ... I would deeply appreciate it if you would refrain from using comments like that on a reply to my posting ... please~ I often have young people coming in to read what I've written and they do read the replies also~ Your cooperation would be greatly appreciated~ *Huglets* to ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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