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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-01-25 03:58 PM


Fixed On You

Listening to music, which
Elevating the beat
Surround my world,
Swinging my sleeves
Up in the air, forming
A circle which slowly sets
Below the earth,
One arm after another
My curtain-llike sleeves raise again.
My mind at ease, my eyes are fixed
On the reflection of another pair of fine eyes.
Prehaps I speak too much
And it vexs your tame,
And that I complain too much,
Which take me away from your arm length,
But what I really am
Is a heat of desire
That seeking to reach out to you.

(c)Jan 21, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Maybe I am not praying...but I know...
You are always listening...to my soul...

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-01-25 05:02 PM


Eliza:  A provocative poem!  Interesting images were created by it!

Betty Lou Hebert

lorenlynn
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2 posted 2003-02-11 10:13 PM


Interesting read.

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-02-20 01:06 PM


very good, descriptive, love it
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4 posted 2003-02-20 08:11 PM


Good poem Eliza.  Joyce
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