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Colour me purple |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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Lush crimson craves heat thrives in heat. Pale lilacs are young lovers lost in rapture. Sun’s gold wealth of the earth cuddles babies in the park. Fall colors array its dazzling yellows and cool greens. Black enshrouds hearts in mourning their grief unabated. Grey shadows gentle blanket usher night’s awakening. I dabble in my easel inventing new tints colouring myself purple. |
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janmew Member
since 2001-10-27
Posts 134Canada |
I really enjoyed this trip around the paint tray watching the shades take shape on the eisle. This poem had a lovely flow to it.  I have only one minor suggestion, which would be to see if you can get away from repeating the word 'heat' so close together. Just a suggestion. Jan |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think you have found the essence of the colors with your poetry. A fun trip so early this morning. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A palatable pallet of colour indeed. Very nice. |
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Blush Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 56Ky |
i love to blend colors with poetry and you have done this superbly Susan~~~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ah yes very colorful! I love all of it, especially the cheeky ending   Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks poets, you made my day with your generous comments. A find day today here, one could easily be in the mood to paint - which I cant do. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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