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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
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0 posted 2002-11-19 08:34 PM


Just-
When you lon-g
For dessert,
Mirror, mirror, says no.
NO.
"Why?" is what you ask,
But the reason is simple, simple.

"A little sweet, please."
Too much calories,
And you cough...Endlessly.
It Hurts my ears,
And it hurts your throat.

"Oh, you've no compassion for me."
"Don't you know it's har-d
To not give in... the tempta-tion.
Don't you know how hard I tr-ied!"

"And it hurts my feel-ing...
(Excuse me, sir. I've feeling too.)
When you mention the "f" word...(FAT)"

Speaker: STOP!
You know what,
I've a perfect solution for you.

Just visualize you can be slim,
And how much you hate to be si-ck...

Speaker2: Well...
Wonderful a day passed by.

//hehe...I've forgotten all the things I want to say in mind during last two week when I was sick, but this is the only thing that is still remarkable to today I hope you all like this.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2002-11-19 11:48 PM


Eliza:  I'm really sorry to hear you have been sick for two weeks.  Hope you are all well and glad to see you back, writing and posting.  This is a cute poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2002-11-20 07:42 PM


/Glad you're better Eliza and still writing.  I like the way you think.  Joyce
Street Heart
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since 2002-09-05
Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA
3 posted 2002-11-21 01:50 PM


Hi,Eliza...sorry to hear of your infirmity.
Get better,Ok?This was cute.I like the conversational modes you have in there.Is it OK to have sweets now?Sometimes a "sweet" is twice a treat after being so long off your feet.Red licorice always does the trick for me .

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

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