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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-11 09:15 PM



I've peered into the crystal.
There were no dreams or visions
waiting within refraction of light
as the sun played, with twirl of hand,
upon the intricate cut of edge.
All I saw was the brilliant slice
of light, twist and turn in air.
A rainbow of color, there, afloat
upon the nothing of space, yet
displayed in twinkle, sparkle
cliche perhaps, but the light
it danced, and this was vision
enough for me. I felt no need
to delve deeper for fortune told.

WhiteRose 11/11/02


"my reflection becomes me"

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-11-2002 09:15 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-11-11 09:54 PM


The Light is enough.  Joyce
alterego
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since 2002-02-23
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2002-11-25 09:38 AM


I seemed to have missed this one earlier (as many other's must have) because it is very lovely.  Captivating!

As one who used the crystal on occasion, I would say you have definitely captured the essence of it's inner and outer beauty in this piece.  Very well penned, indeed!!!


Sheila

Create something infinite today - Smile!!!

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