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Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

0 posted 2002-09-24 09:00 PM

Fatal Heart...down to the limit
beating.......beating.......still until it's nil
Never while you sever all procrastinating will
Serving up confections that will ulcerate your mind
Masqueraded poison in the morsel that you find
Pendulating reason in dichotomous disguise
The clock is ticking out on your impending dire demise
So you scramble while you ramble through excuses why you play
The game's another gamble you haven't got the funds to pay
Love is more than just desire...a fire compared to spark
You'll stumble through the jumble as you manufacture Dark
You paint your own denial with an amputated hand,
for your senses are on trial in a non-existent land
Cruelty confined within a deprivated glove,
for the kindnesses you carry
don't own the slightest bit of Love

June 27th,2002

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

1 posted 2002-09-24 09:30 PM

Street Heart, This poem says to me that the person who inspired it, not only didn't have a clue as to the real meaning of love but also managed to delude themselves into believing that they di. Am I right? I love the way you express yourself.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-26 12:04 PM

Really enjoyed this.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-09-26 02:10 AM

My goodness Steet Heart you say this pretty. I can't pretend I know what you're saying, but I sure like the way you say it. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2002-09-26 05:42 AM

I can't begin to tell you how I needed to read this incredible poem today! I have such a one in my life now, but not for long...for I too have seen the terrible truth...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2002-09-26 05:51 AM

Hey Geoffrey..

another great one from you.
enjoyed m'friend.

Maree

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