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I can't help you

akira
Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2002-09-24 02:51 PM

I look into your eyes and I see the pain you try to hide
I hold you in my arms and remember the tears you cried

I think of the times you’d talk to me about life
I remember how much you hurt from the strife

Your gone now, you walked away
And now I don’t know what to say

You mean the world to me
But it’s to late for me to make you see

I can’t reach your heart anymore
Because you’ve closed that door

I want to help you through this time
But all I’ve been able to do is write this rhyme

Akira
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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2002-09-24 08:24 PM

Sometimes there's nothing else we can do. Good expression!

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-26 12:05 PM

Sometimes words can help more than one knows. Very nice poem. Thanks for the read.

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

3 posted 2002-09-26 01:29 AM

akira, this is a well expressed poem. You may have helped more then you know.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2002-09-26 02:12 AM

There is a lot of love and desperation in this poem. Well done. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

5 posted 2002-09-26 05:47 AM

akira, there is just so much we can do. We each must find our own path of redemption. Beautiful poem. Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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