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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-29 09:25 PM



Less Than Lovers
~*Marge Tindal*~

Less than lovers
More than friends
We meet on the heart-road
that has no end~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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pegasus111
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1 posted 2002-08-30 08:45 AM


a very interesting piece. much is implied in a very few words. nicely done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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2 posted 2002-08-30 10:02 AM


This one definitely touches my heart. *S* I like it much, Miss Marge. *S*
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3 posted 2002-08-30 02:21 PM


Pegasus~
Thank you ... sometimes ... less says more~

SweetSuthernGal~
I sure would have placed my bets on you liking this one~
My 'heart' dedicated to you ...
as well as to myself ...
for we both understand it so clearly~
LOVE YOU~
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2002-08-30 02:50 PM


short and sweet
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5 posted 2002-08-30 03:39 PM


Dear Marge,  I nominate you to come up with the right name for the in-betweens.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2002-08-30 06:51 PM


Marge:  Very poignant and bittersweet.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2002-08-31 10:47 PM


This says so much. I really like it.
Betty

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8 posted 2002-09-07 02:48 PM


ChitSank~
Thank you~

Joyce~
LOL-ing ...
Well, I've got Yet-to-be's and Used-to-be's ...
might have to put my thinking cap on for
those nearly-be's~

BettyLou~
Ahhhhh ...
those Don't have-to-keep-ums are sweeter~

Betty~
Thank you sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2002-09-07 10:56 PM


How perfect, Marge!
The essence of a rare relationship!

Lary



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10 posted 2002-09-08 02:27 PM


Lovely, Marge!
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-09-08 07:12 PM


LaryALee~
Thanks ... the perfect relationship~
AND ... you don't have to wash his clothes !
Tee-Hee~

Denise~
Thanks dearest friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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12 posted 2002-09-12 09:56 AM


Short and sweet. There is no mistaking the meaning. Great.
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13 posted 2002-09-16 08:56 PM


Chili~
Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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