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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Amazing Garden by July 11, 2002 Like a garden of roses, Your garden is filled with love. As I walk by each blossom, I see your care and beauty. You may not be The greatest with fame, But you touch all that Surrounding you. How can I be so sure? It’s because you touch me In an unspeakable way. Oh you never know That you touch my heart… So deeply that I stop…and ponder What’s meaning of life. Oh you never know That once I enter this garden… So profoundly I’m amazed… That I want to stay- I want to have a garden…like yours. //this is specially for my mother and grandmother. My grandmother influence me early in my childhood. My mother influence me in my teen years. Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely tribute to your mother and grandmother. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: I enjoyed your poem it's a nice thing to be able to use your poetry to thank your mother and grandmother. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
well,that wasnt bad.but u should try more to be a little specific when ur writing a poem in dedication to someone.i believe poems need a little mystery but poems for people or inspired by particular people should be more direct.hope u know what i mean. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thank you Star T. for your advice.  Eliza Simmons |
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