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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2002-07-12 07:58 AM


I lost my marbles
over a girl
and she doesn’t want
to see me anymore
and I don’t even need
to take a guess why not!

I drooled over her
like a fluffy puppy
salivating
over a bone
precious as it was

and what could be worse
no other girl comes
near me anymore
and I don’t even need
to take a guess why not
I had lost my marbles
over a girl

all about a girl
all about a girl

give me all you love
that’s all she said she wanted
and so I gave it all I got
and gave I did

then she said you give too much
you should learn to take some too
so we should split to learn a trick or two

true. I had lost my marbles
over a girl

all about a girl
all about a girl

now I am nuts!

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2002-07-12 08:14 PM


A sticky situation.  Joyce
Star T
Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US
2 posted 2002-07-13 01:32 AM


that is so sad.but i feel u.and its heart breaking too.all u have to do is open up ur heart and give love another chance.it'll come to u.and every bad experience makes u a better person,a better lover,a better everything.so move on my friend...
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2002-07-13 07:27 AM


They'll do it to you every time. Take care.

Melton

[This message has been edited by 2dalimit (07-13-2002 06:37 PM).]

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