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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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One More Chance ~*Marge Tindal*~  This one is so easy and I can tell you why My 'thing to do' would be to kiss my children one more time before I die~ My mother passed in the mid-of-night and though I'm sure she knew I didn't have the chance to say, one more I love you ~ One more kiss to send her on her beyond trip One more goodbye forever sealed within my lips~ One more chance to say what I know I'd said before But, one more chance ... just one more chance ... Is a moment I would have implored~ So each day I try to honor her with the impact she had on me For without her love I would not have been the poet of me ~ ~Dedicated to the beautiful memory of my mother~ Beverly W. Drury Adams March 31, 1925 - October 4, 1995 ~*~ Following a challenge left by Paladin, I felt this piece would serve as my Mother's Day tribute~ His challenge can be found here - /pip/Forum7/HTML/000439.html ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (05-08-2002 03:33 AM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
great minds think alike..my new post deals with the same subject but from as different direction the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Lovely words! Yes, there is always the longing for one more chance. (((marge))) IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together from all corners of the globe. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: I;m sure your mother knew how much you loved her and is still watching over you from Heaven! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I just read Pegasus' poem and then yours. They were much alike in theme but you put a happier spin on yours. Yes we would all like to have one more chance. But we learn to make the best of it while we can. Very nice Marge. Love, Joyce |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A lovely write from a lovely person.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thank you all so much .... it was just such an obvious choice that quickly popped into my mind~ Happy Mother's Day to those of you to which it applies ... and *hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
My mother passed in the mid-of-night ditto... I wish I would have stayed longer that night. But, I feel as though she waited until she was alone. Thanks, Melton |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Aw, Marge, I lost my mom too and i know for sure your mom knew she was loved...how could she not, with such a warm and loving daughter like you!! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely poetry as always.....Marge!!! I bet she was a wonderful lady!!!! ((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))) Happy Mother's Day too!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Absolutly breathtaking. Very, very well penned. I loved the graphic as well. What a beautiful tribute. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thats beauiful marge well done I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*My friends ... thank you ALL so much for your tenderly thoughtful replies~ Each of us has that 'special' Mommy remember .. and I'm sure working my heart over-time to make certain I leave my children some special, special remembers~ I had a WONDERFUL Mother's Day within the loving circle of family~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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