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2dalimit
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0 posted 2002-04-10 10:44 AM



The Big Picture [Senyrus]

World nations involved
The Great War and WW II
Wars to end all Wars

Nuclear missiles
My gun is bigger than yours
Will it ever end

Intellect predicts
WW III Darkens the world
Can MAN start again

What’s next…WW IV
Violence will forever reign
Sticks and stones will rule



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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-04-10 11:53 AM


Very good 2dalimit.  You've take a simple form and made a great poem.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-10-2002 11:55 AM).]

wordancer
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2 posted 2002-04-10 11:57 AM


Starkly outlines the world in just a few words.

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2dalimit
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3 posted 2002-04-10 08:27 PM


Joyce and Wordancer… Thanks for reading. I hope it has got you to ponder for a moment.

Melton

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