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Gone

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2002-02-06 12:02 PM

Gone

It was supposed to be
the finest time of my life;
but reality intervened,
driving you away,
and now all I feel
is the roughen cloak
of self loathing.

© 2/5/02

And I lie
Here in bed
All alone
I can't mend
But I feel
Tomorrow wil be OK
-Staind

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-02-06 02:02 PM

Jonas~
Wow ... you've certainly conveyed a feeling of despair~
Very effectively done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Wobbly Head Bob
Member

since 2000-05-15

Posts 299
Virginia, USA

2 posted 2002-02-07 03:19 PM

Its good to know someone else has a matching cloak..and I'm not wearing the only one sewn by reality.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2002-02-07 09:17 PM

Very well expressed, Jonas.

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-09 03:23 AM

Thank everyone. As you can see, I am not in a good mood these days

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2002-03-15 04:06 PM

Oh how I can relate to this!

I find myself looking out for your work Jonus.

Maree

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-19 11:28 AM

Thank you for reading Dark Angel

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