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wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
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0 posted 2001-12-15 09:27 PM


mommy was once a homecoming queen
they said she was a meteor in the new dawn sky
as stars twinkled in her eyes
the world within her grasp
a golden ring
thus and so
this was the story mommy told us
as she kicked off her platform shoes
and we would fight over
who was to bring the bunny slippers
‘cause her feet would ache so
from a hash-slinging day
then home to cook
for us

creamed, canned pink flamingoes
(fresh ones were too dear)
served over pointed toast
with a sprinkle of sunflower seeds
and the frozen neon peas
were carefully scooped from a hot water bath
with her magic slot machine
that turned into a wooden handle baton
to choreograph the evening dinner
homework! who’s turn it was to walk the dog
“jonny don’t tease your sister, sue”
mommy would sing
“you wash”
“she’ll dry”
“lay out your clothes for tomorrow”
while I refresh my memory
of how to divide pi
later for dessert
tra-la!
fresh made
green-eyed monster cookies
with purple icing
then she would tease that the milk
"it ain't vanilla!"
it came from brown cows

no matter how
you slice and dice it
mommy is still the homecoming queen
and we are the ornaments
in her crown


-Wordancer, the poet who writes to the beat of a different drummer

© Copyright 2001 Beverly A. Tift - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-12-15 10:18 PM


Such a touching poem, wordancer! What a beautiful tribute to her! I hope you share this with her!
wordancer
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2 posted 2001-12-16 08:08 AM


Denise, thanks for the kind words, though I'm going to have to admit that this is just a made-up poem from a word list.  


wordancer

[This message has been edited by wordancer (edited 12-16-2001).]

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-12-16 11:32 AM


Well you've created a believable life experience from your "made-up poem from a word list"!  Nicely done  

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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4 posted 2001-12-16 05:58 PM


An enjoyable read!

Betty Lou Hebert

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-12-16 06:14 PM


I really like this one! It reads like a catchy bluegrass song! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

wordancer
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6 posted 2001-12-17 11:02 AM


hi ellie, thanks...I love that thought.

SmittenKitten/Trillium, thanks for the read!

-wordancer

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