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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Trapped? Sharp, piercing words...she cries covers her ears in pain. Big, tough, stupid bully boy making his lady cower... He’s angry over money, of course Justified? Indeed! It’s silliness! He’s got every right to yell! Teach her a lesson, damn right! Later; when her tears have fallen when her heart is broken when she feels so very alone... He says; “please forgive me,baby... you know you can count on me. I’m so sorry, I’m here for you. I’ll always be here for you, my love” “Baby, when you are frightened when your world kicks you when I make you cry the most...” “My love, you can count on me. I’ll hold your hand especially after we’ve been bad.” “Please lady, let me comfort you. I’ll always be here for you please baby, I love you so.” “Please forgive me, let me kiss those tears away. Let me say, I’m sorry let me be your loving man. Oh baby, see my tears mingle I cry your cry once more I regret my anger a thousand times.” “I am here for you, my love if you will have me... may I hold you now? Will you let me dry your tears? I love you, my lady.” And once again, she lovingly trusts sealing with salty tears his forgiveness until next time... Tramp Poet: once a scooter tramp no choice about poet... [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
sad...for so many reasons... Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Love comes in many ways but it does not come with cruelty to one you are pledged to cherish. Joyce |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Too much truth in this one! Very well said!  I am many. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you only get a second chance one time... *sigh* redemption is nothing if the words are hollow. it's sad because those hollow generic phrases are the real words that actually come spouting forth. well captured. "the choice of futures is made |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah never trust a a man that says all that in one breath. But very relistic and sad. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
 Best |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds an awfully lot like my first marriage. Very sad. Very well expressed, Daniel. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This happens all too often. Well expressed! Betty Lou Hebert |
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