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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

0 posted 2001-11-27 04:44 PM

You're my beloved, every breath to me
the flash of a forever lover’s plead
a wave of life from 'neath the depths of sea
a recompense to fill my every need.
My Love, you hold the conscience of the moon
unbraided ribbons fall in your embrace
and I, transfigured, sing within our tune
a melody of sweet resounding grace!
Please turn to meet my gaze in dawning light
and love me in a sigh within a kiss
then come to me past morn into the night
and take me into captured haunting bliss.
You’re my beloved, you are mine indeed
the only part of heaven that I need.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-27-2001).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-11-27 05:31 PM

Dear Kathleen; Sigh...So exquisitely romantic..beautiful sonnet, a work of art, indeed! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-11-28 11:49 PM

A masterful sonnet and I enjoyed every word.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2001-11-29 09:25 AM

WOW. Thanks for sharing this extremely loving and beautiful poem.

Melton

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-11-30 11:26 PM

Fabulous sonnet, hon!!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-12-01 08:48 PM

This is lovely, Kathleen!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-12-01 09:05 PM

Thank you so much. I wrote so many and then had a kind of writer's block but maybe someday soon I will write another sonnet.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2001-12-05 01:06 PM

Dear Kathleen,
I really liked this. I especially loved the couplet.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-12-05 01:50 PM

Thank you Pilgrimage!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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